Friday, 26 February 2016

Production: Script Editing

The picture to the left shows our original draft script, with our edits an ideas written in green. There were details we felt were useless in the script, including the numerical details, as they add no depth to the story. We have also added a line at the end of the script which should run alongside the title, and could leave the plot of the film open to interpretation for the audience. Here is the full script now:

Aidan: '2 years ago my life changed. I loved racing, it was my life. I was at Silverstone, it was a big race for me. I remember the car slipping, I can't remember much after that.'

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'3 months later, I woke up. [long pause] It's taken a long time for me to get to where I am today. I'm not the same person anymore...'

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'Isn't it [a] cliché that bad things happen to good people? I often come back and just sit here, waiting for something to change... but, for that to happen, I need to be driven [in time with the title]'


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